Even though I have read Edgar Allen Poe’s “The Tell-Tale
Heart”, every time I read it I still have the same reaction. My tempo as I read
changes. At the beginning I read at a normal pace because nothing has happened
that is too suspicious. As the book progresses though I always seem to read a
bit faster because the narrator decides to kill the old man. As a reader I am
intrigued and want to know what happens next. When the narrator has killed the
old man my reading starts to slow down because I see the climax as being over.
The main action that the story has been leading up to has ended. But then my
reading pace picks up again as the narrator goes crazy. I love how Poe’s
writing can have such an effect on how I read his books. It’s completely
different than if I read a love story or any other story because of his writing
techniques.
After analyzing his writing I think it has to do with his
punctuation marks. If you look at a page dashes are seen throughout. The dashes
enunciate a point that a writer is trying to make and draws the reader’s eye to
that point. A writer may use a dash frequently, but by frequently I mean once
or twice within a paper. In comparison to Poe who is using the dash at least
once a paragraph. “You should have seen how wisely I proceeded—with what
caution—with what foresight—with what dissimulation I went to work!” (Poe 13). Reading
this sentence fast is easy because with the dashes you add emphasis to each of
this things he does well. For me when I read it I read it as a mad man would be
saying the words, pausing after each point drawing you in and saying it louder
and louder to make a point of how smart he is.
Exclamation points are another punctuation mark that is used
more frequently than most writers. I know for myself I use exclamation points only
when I am texting friends or sending out emails to family members. With the
exclamation point I am using it to show excitement, but I make sure when I am
texting and emailing with exclamation points that I don’t overdo it. I am never
that excited about my topic. Poe on the other hand I believe is using his
exclamation points to show the madness of the narrator. Especially by the end
of the story the exclamations are in every sentence. “Oh God! what could I do? I foamed—I raved—I swore! I
swung the chair …but the noise arose over all and continually increased. It
grew louder—louder—louder!” (Poe 17).
In these lines Poe is using both the dash as well as the exclamation points to
show the progression of the narrator’s madness. Which overall speeds up the
pace the readers read the story at because that is how the narrator is speaking
the lines as well, he is saying each thing faster and faster, thus showing his
madness.
- Rachel
You make a very interesting point that the pace of reading changes throughout the reading, which I completely agree with. It is true that the punctuation changes the way the reading is taken in and the dashes and explanation points are so important for the meaning Poe must be trying to portray. You did a wonderful job analyzing this piece of work!
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You made some really interesting points here that I loved reading. I enjoyed the focus you put on Poe's punctuation and how that affects the reader, because more often than not people read subconsciously, and don't actively consider why or how the very subtle choices made for the narrative structure alter their perception of the text. You went into a lot of detail too, not just ghosting over the broad idea of punctuation, and your analysis of the actual body of the text - what makes it work and click uniquely in the readers mind - was very well done! Awesome job. <3
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Good points, and I'd agree with you about the punctuation.
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